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Friday 21 February 2014

Narrtive 2

“Come on girls’s, we have to leave now”. Her mum shouted. On a early exciting  morning Jessica and her family went to the airport. They got their tickets, then said bye to their family.

“ I’m so excited”. Rosie said with excitement. They were on there way to Samoa. “ WOW check out these seats”. Rosie shouted. “ They are so comfortable ". They were so hungry so they ordered some waffle’s. “ These waffle’s are massive”. Lauren said.

“We are here”. Mum said to the girl’s. They got out of the plane,they got there bags. There dad paid the taxi. They soon got to a hotel, jessica’s mum got the key and opened the door. “ I’m so excited".

They got in and were over excited cause they got there own room’s. Rosie jumped onto the bed “It’s so bouncy”. “This is going to be so fun” lauren shouted.
Rosie got out her phone and took pictures with her sister’s.

“I’m going to meet up with my friends”. Mum said, she left off with her husband. The three girls were hungry so they ordered some water and pancakes. “ WOW look at the size of these pancakes” Lauren said.

She then took a picture, they started eating. Rosie’s mother came back and asked them if they wanted to go to the beach. “ Yes”. They all said. They got ready and walked to the beach, “ Wow there a huge waves”. Lauren said with excitement. “ Can we go their first”. Jessica begged her mum. “ Okay”. Mum said.

“ WOW, look at these kayak’s mum”. Lauren said. Lauren’s mum brought three kayak’s for Lauren,Jessica and Rosie.

Later on they pushed there kayak’s into the sea, Lauren and Jessica wanted to have a race to the biggest mountain. Rosie, Mum and dad took a boat to the biggest mountain.

Lauren and Jessica suddenly started screaming, they saw one of the most scariest things they had ever seen, it was a SHARK “ AHHH ”. Lauren screamed her lungs out .

“ HELP ”. Jessica shouted, Lauren’s kayak flipped over and the shark had bit her leg. The shark then swam off. Lauren’s mum came swimming as fast as she could.

They carried her carefully and laid her down onto the sand. Luckily mum had a first aid kit with her. Rosie couldn't stand looking at Lauren. Dad wrapped her leg, lauren then started screaming. “ It hurt’s”.

A few hours later they got to the hospital . The doctor told her parent’s that it’s okay. They got back onto the plane. “ I’m never going back there”. Said Lauren.