Prompt Writing 2

On a shiny, sunny day Emma’s family went to the beach. “Hurry up Emma we ain’t going to find a spot at the beach”.

“Look at the time Emma it’s almost 10:00” said Lucas. Emma took so long in the bathroom. She had been taking a long time in the bathroom because she had been trying on her swimming togs. “Mum, Emma is taking a long time” complained Lucas. Emma finally got out of the bathroom, then Emma, Lucas and their parents zoomed off to the beach.

It was so packed they did not find a spot. Lucas and Emma’s parents were so angry at her because they didn’t find a spot at the beach. “It’s not my fault “ said Emma. Emma went running away from her parents and Lucas. Emma had just turned seven and wanted to be just like a grown up. Emma could not really swim but she was so sad just because her parents and brother got angry at her so she ran into the water.

Lucas ran into the water where is she I can not find her. Suddenly a man that was under water looking around for some strange things and saw Emma drowning. The man swam to her and brought her up to the surface and laid his towel down for Emma to lie down on. Lucas said “mum, dad look Emma”. Emma’s family went running to her, even other people were looking at what had happened. All Emma’s family could hear people saying “who did it”.  “She isn't breathing” said Triston.

“She isn’t breathing, call the ambulance” said Triston. Triston was the nice man who got her out of the water. Emma’s mum, Matilda went running to the car to get her phone to ring the ambulance. The ambulance came, rushing. When they had got to the hospital Emma’s mum was so sad. The doctor had come in and said “Emma is fine”.

They had went home and didn’t want to make Emma sad or let her run away. Lucas said that he didn’t want to go to the beach if that was going to happen again. Emma’s family felt better when they all said sorry for being mean to Emma, but Emma needed to remember not to take so long in the bathroom again.